T3/W7 Descriptive Paragraph
-Write a descriptive paragraph of a monster.
Success Criteria
-I must use showing not telling sentences in my story so the reader can create a picture in their head.
-I must use my five senses.
Everybody would run and scream down the dark alley running away from the stomach churning, blood dripping beast. Your lips would tremble and every hair on your body would stand straight your back like a cat thats fallen into water. His stomach was always grumbling as he sweared into the distance thumping his feet along the gravel paths. He wasn’t very tall but he could probably fight 10 lions.
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