Electronics

Success Criteria:

I must have a topic sentence with the main idea

I must have detailed sentences to support the topic.

I must have a concluding sentence at the end of my paragraph.

Omaru Creek

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These days electronics are the mind taking things that consume all of your time.

They can be taken for granted or used for great reasons such as learning projects or supportive games. However then there is the apps which consume all of your time and energy. These conclude of Facebook, Youtube and other popular apps like these. Most people would wake up in the morning and spend 20-30 minutes on their phones just checking the updates on their social media accounts. Crazy enough people spend most of their lives looking down at these little nuisances. We need to get more out there and not look spend our lives on these as we could actually get more stupider.. So get outside and see the world for what it really is.