D.A.S.H Writing
-Use the process of a D.A.S.H writing.
- Use expensive vocabulary.
-Be grammatically correct.
D- Description
A- Action
S- Speech
H- How the character is feeling?
Rhetorical question/ Cliff hanger
I am ready. The surfing competition only lasts a week but i have been training for years. Mum and Dad think otherwise but I guess what's in my heart stays there. Then the waves hit me. I can feel every splash and the excitement that rolls down my body, also filled with doubt and anxiousness.
I repeatedly say to myself “You can do this, it’s what you trained for, for ages”. I see my parents in the distance with worried looks but they are still cheering.
And instance my heart is pounding and my stomach is churning. My eyes become blurry but I am strong and the butterflies are nothing.
Will I be able to do this?
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