KIA ORA!!! Moana I really like that you had the confidence to share your dislikes,for me I have learnt more about what really ticks you off. To make this better I think you can try to use other words than ''I don't like'' maybe you can use i dislike for example, other than that great job
This google draw shows an awful lot about you and I'm empress that you're able to tell things people don't really know about you and as for myself I'm not able to do that so well done.
This google draw shows an awful lot about you and I'm empress that you're able to tell things people don't really know about you and as for myself I'm not able to do that so well done.
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KIA ORA!!! Moana I really like that you had the confidence to share your dislikes,for me I have learnt more about what really ticks you off. To make this better I think you can try to use other words than ''I don't like'' maybe you can use i dislike for example, other than that great job
Hi moana
This google draw shows an awful lot about you and I'm empress that you're able to tell things people don't really know about you and as for myself I'm not able to do that so well done.
Hi moana
This google draw shows an awful lot about you and I'm empress that you're able to tell things people don't really know about you and as for myself I'm not able to do that so well done.
Hi Moana,
I really like how you wrote and put this altogether. I really learnt a lot about you. Good Job
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